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Homework: Slowing it Down, Flash Draft Leads AND Snapshots
Open up your FlashDraft #2. Copy and paste the entire narrative onto this new document.
Select one scene/sentence in your flash draft to slow down to create detailed moments. Do this, by adding details, tension, and varying sentence lengths. This revision should be an entire paragraph in length (minimum of five sentences).
Highlight these moments in light blue. Annotate as Slowing It Down
Make sure that you have all sections annotated (Lead, two Snapshots, three Inner Thoughts/Feelings) and color-coded yellow for Snapshots and light blue for Slowing it Down paragraph
Select one scene/sentence in your flash draft to slow down to create detailed moments. Do this, by adding details, tension, and varying sentence lengths. This revision should be an entire paragraph in length (minimum of five sentences).
Highlight these moments in light blue. Annotate as Slowing It Down
Make sure that you have all sections annotated (Lead, two Snapshots, three Inner Thoughts/Feelings) and color-coded yellow for Snapshots and light blue for Slowing it Down paragraph
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March 31 9:25 AM